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tarotbyphil's avatar

"Or are we fevered ghosts?"

Fabulous image, thank you 🙏🏼

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Treading Water's avatar

Thank you Phil

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It's Hell, Actually's avatar

It's official. You wield the scalpel beautifully.

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Treading Water's avatar

Thank you so much 🥹🫶

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Emma Steel's avatar

Beautiful!!

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I’d cross the veil for you,

Forsaking any paradise,

If I thought,

For one instance in eternity,

You’d be mine.

♾️

Your name I would carve,

High among the stars,

Burning the heavens themselves,

With a fire,

All could see.

♾️

So let me haunt you,

Until the end of days,

Never leaving this world,

Or the next,

Until we can be together.

♾️

And we watch the suns,

Burning out,

One by one,

Until there is darkness,

And we settled in it.

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Treading Water's avatar

Beautiful. Thank you Emma 😊🫶✨

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Emma Steel's avatar

You are most welcome!!!💕

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Helana Grayson's avatar

I love the ending of this poem, it actually gave me goosebumps. Great writing 🩷

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Treading Water's avatar

Thank you!!! 😊✨

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